You need to explain why you’ve chosen Ward Thomas as a comparison, as you’ve said that they’re more country so how do they really relate to the Indie genre? You’ve not talked about appeal to women in a traditionally male guitar-based genre – you’re missing a trick here. Some editing errors made on the page (erroneous apostrophes, missing spaces, etc.). Check for spelling, paragraphing, and that your writing makes sense, as at times there are errors.
You need to explain why you’ve chosen Ward Thomas as a comparison, as you’ve said that they’re more country so how do they really relate to the Indie genre?
ReplyDeleteYou’ve not talked about appeal to women in a traditionally male guitar-based genre – you’re missing a trick here.
Some editing errors made on the page (erroneous apostrophes, missing spaces, etc.).
Check for spelling, paragraphing, and that your writing makes sense, as at times there are errors.