Teacher Feedback

Front cover:

• The information under the barcode is too large for where it is placed
• The styling of the models needs to be changed
• The lighting on the model in the white is wrong as her chin cannot be defined from her neck.
• The 'INDEED" text is illegible the the positioning doesn't work where it is
• The bands used at the top of the page are not just indie artists, they are mostly a mixture of indie and rock

Contents Page:

• There needs to be photo credits for each of the images
• The pictures are too similar, they need to be more interesting
• The word 'Features' and 'Every Month' need to be bigger than the numbers
• The phrasing of a lot of the explanations needs to be better
• 'The Fratellis' is not mentioned on the cover and is indie rock
• Change name of 'Every Month'
• Too many pages given for crossword

Double Page Spread:

• The title needs to be brought together
• The margins need to be bigger
• The spacing between the text and models need to be larger and even
• Style and positioning of the models needs to change
• Photo credits need to be given
• Too many different colours of text
• 'So' is said too many times
• The interview needs to be changed to be more realistic
• The outro can be deleted
• Columns would look better
• Edit the article down
• Be consistent with punctuation